January 13th, 2013, 5:54 am

end of chapter eleven (and thank you for reading dfhdgh)

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January 13th, 2013, 5:59 am

the, the further this story goes on the more i want to talk about the details

thanks so much for reading, if you do

i know i don't draw the best art, or the most expressive characters ='I i'm really happy peiple decide to read this dumb old story anyway Dx

jealousy is such a strange emotion. i think the most impirtant thing to take from this emotion that it's almost never about the other person, but your own insecurities, and where that comes from, and why you feel them.


uurgg whatever, thanks for reading if you do, and thanks for commenting if you do ='))

November 17th, 2018, 6:21 pm

USERS

January 13th, 2013, 6:10 am

I just love this comic so much, daaamn I feel more sorry for sasha than for blake tbh, cus he's being a douche right now. Just DAMN.

January 13th, 2013, 7:39 am

Glad to be back again

Finally starting to feel the inklings of sympathy for Blake, since he's such an idealist. He seems to just want to find some kind of soul mate, something more serious that what Blythe wants from him. BUT - and its a big but - he is completely ignoring all the signals Blythe is giving him, that she isn't as needy as he is. Then he just acts like such a childish bastard to Ruthie, to Sasha and somehow people are still giving him support when he treats them like crap. Arrrg.

Oh look how much you've got me thinking. Great chapter, you've still got it!

January 13th, 2013, 8:03 am

Ah, Blake, I can taste your insecurity, it's pouring out of your soul, mate.
This is what I was talking about, a fully fledged character, no necessarily bad, but probably wrong.
Same goes for Sasha, I cannot look forward to what's next more than I do now.

January 13th, 2013, 12:58 pm

Godamn this is good...

Your character development is flawless. You're a fucking genius.

January 13th, 2013, 2:08 pm

I agree with SketchJelly. I like Blake's character but since the whole Blithe thing he's been a bit of a douche :/
I really like Sasha though :D Can we see him more... and more... o_______O

January 13th, 2013, 7:53 pm

Uh....

I really want to be mad at Sasha because violence never solved anything but he's had that black eye coming for a while now. This also goes into how Blythe just manipulates others wether she's aware of it or not, she's the girl counterpart of Blake really.

January 14th, 2013, 4:14 pm

Oh man, these last few pages, just... WOW. Really well done. The expressions and the pace, AHHHH so great.

January 14th, 2013, 7:42 pm

It's kind of weird because Blythe knows Sasha likes her and she still wants him to come see her make out with Blake. Why? What is she doing why does she want this. Maybe she wants the peace, and she wants to show him she likes him or she just does and wants him with her, but she has to consider how this must be for him....poor girl. Just cause she's in control of her emotions? Maybe she's an idealist like Blake then, and it'll work out?

Also I like how you mentioned guys with the physical intimacy thing, the way you said it made sense and it was cool. You make people think, I think, since you're so observant of things and people and their motivations and you put it in your work (I'm working backwards here though, I assume you're really into studying people around you? in a good way). Or maybe it's not that you're observant but you think back/reflect on these things a lot since they interest you.

January 14th, 2013, 7:44 pm

ALSO I LIKE HOW YOU MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS TALK, IT'S HARD TO DO THAT WITH COMICS, MAKE IT FEEL LIKE THEY'RE ACTUALLY *TALKING* instead of just speech bubbles and faces and mouths, there's enough motion and expressiveness to make us feel like we're watching something that's more like a movie instead of clicking through a comic

January 15th, 2013, 2:15 pm

Wow!!! This chapter was just so intense!!! I reeeally liked the way you built up the tension between Blake and Sasha!
I just have to compliment you once again on such wonderful characters and addictive story! Can't wait to see what comes next!
Thank you for the update!!! <3

January 17th, 2013, 4:52 am

Why is this comic just so amazing :'(
never gets old, LOVE IT

January 19th, 2013, 5:07 pm

the story is moving like leaps and leaps and LEAPS! I've been a bit busy emotionally so I've saved this comic for a while -hopefully back now! I've missed this~~<3

January 19th, 2013, 10:44 pm

yyyyyyyyeaaaaaah

January 20th, 2013, 8:44 pm

OH NO POOR SASHA SOBB he looked sad he punched him BUT THEY ARE RIGHT HE TOTALLY PROVOKED HIM i guess i can see why he's jealous though in a way...GREAT WORK THIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY LIVELY~

January 20th, 2013, 10:41 pm

ugh I love this but blake is so killing me right now!!!! like what the fuck man!?!?!?? (omg im so into this^^)

January 22nd, 2013, 11:13 am

Totally right about jealousy thats why you shouldnt act on it. Its a demon that should be ignored. I feel it, but I feel even more dismay straight after when I do. Like I've defeated myself already. Its pathetic.
Your comic is super fun, I enjoy reading it. And it is expressive, I love how your characters always kick up drama. ^^

January 22nd, 2013, 2:58 pm

These last few pages have been amazing, panelling, acting, dialogue! Can't wait to see the fall out from this barny.

January 24th, 2013, 12:32 am

I really love your art style! I was wondering if you had a DA account or tumblr or something...so I could check out more of it? Ahaha

January 28th, 2013, 4:38 pm

@SketchJelly man- I really love your comic... I've been reading it but too shy to comment ..I will...I just want to express my love for what about shadows... So cute so far :')

@Will I'm glad to have you back will, you always write great comments!! Well, I'm so happy to have got YPU thinking ahh ;w; even so, when you wrote this, I think, maybe it's unrealistic for people to have sympathy for such a character!! When I think about it, idk if I'd want to be friends with that person! But I guess I don't mind jerky people, if they are just so dumb and ignorant to their own jerkiness xDD thank you for the details comment man, so appreciated :)

@Earthfield bro....I'm so behind....I still need to do the guest strip ;____; I'm planning to do it this week, so I promise it will be done beofte this weekend AT MOST if not sooner!! Thanks for the sweet comments man :')

@Reiu Shanra oh gosh, thank you so much for this comment!! It really means a lot to me to hear stuff like this..thank you so much!! I hope you enjoy the story so far ;w;~~

@xXJESSEMUFFINSXx I...I don't know what to say...//shottheuheart via fantastic comment ahhhhh omg thank you dsbdfjhdvsbjsdvhbds

@bakura240 hahaha oh I'm really glad you like the sasha character!! XD and yeah Ive seen beofte..in life, sometimes people just...idk they tuen other people into jerks out of obrssion or something, I can't explain it - horrible :'III thanks for commenting!!!!

@Cruz_n_Angel very interesting comment, very interesting to know your thoughts ESP. About Blythe. :)) it's interesting, the idea that people can and could manipulate even w/o realising - also , i think we all have met someone at one point or another we really wish would get 'what's coming to them' (black eyes) hahaha XD thanks so much!!!!

@SignorinaAlli wow thank you so much man!!! ;n;!!!!

@mananabiscuit YPU WROTE SOEM REALLY INTWRESTIGN COMMENTS AND I WANT TOMREPLYMTO THEM WOTH SO MUCH PHILOSIPHY AND INSIGHT BUT I FEEL SO ILL RIGHT NOW AND TOO TIRED TO REPLY BUT I WILL, I WILL - thank you so much!!!!!!

@Maria th-thank you so so much :'( these comments really keep me going, really do :'))

@sillyilly oh god, thank you so much?! ;n;

@jonasfx ommgggg welcome back!! Ofc. I don't mind if you stopped commenting but I hope You are OK if you needed to take an emotional break?! Hope everything is alright man, I don't see anything from your tumblr am I just on at the wrong times?!! Thnx for commenting again :')

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January 29th, 2013, 9:12 am

@3o-s-knight thanks for the hopes!! T^T just been in a slump where I don't feel like I'm going anywhere.
it's good to be back B-)

and about the tumblr, no frequent updating really but I've been slowly and silently updating it with something now and then ;D thanks for the reminder though! I'll be sure to put up more soon~ I've started sorting out the shots from my winter trip up north :)

the weather report says: expect snow! haha

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