February 20th, 2012, 4:34 am

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February 20th, 2012, 4:37 am

a 7 page update plus also there are 2 fanarts- please hceck 'em out

because these artists are way better than I am let's face it!!! D8

I just want to say thank you so much ='III I will rpely iondivisually in a second, I'm really overwhelemed by the response on last update, i'm really shocked that sasha is such a popular chaacter! =0 thank you so much everyone who reads and, i hope this comic continues OK for you ='U

I hope this update makes sense/is done alright, there's a bit o' mystery invoolved, and I'm not sure if i have pulled off the emotion right tbh. =I

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February 24th, 2012, 3:57 pm

@Mimi-Evelyn AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....... I just don't think my thank you reply would do this comment any justice ;m; I really don't know what to say other than it was freaking awesome hearing all about 'theroies' and notions on the characters and I found it incredibly insightful and fascinating :'DDD thank you SO SO MUCH!! It totally made my Day when I received it :'))))) You are totally spot on about Janey's character yes!! Heh :'D thanks so much for such a lovely comment, you are like beyond my mind man :'DDD sometime next week I am going to text you for a spotofy session so I can grill you about FM LOL

@eternalbeliever12 ps. I LOVE YOUR CURRENT AVATAR IT ROCKS!!! :'D

@Iron @Rennakins @Ponyta @forgotten_cake @mananabiscuit @NonameXP @eternalbeliever12 hi everyone! Im doing somewhat a group reply because everyone wrote simmilar things! I guess I wanted to say how greatful and tocuhed I am that everyone wrote their opinions on this situation... I it's alright to write this but I really wanted to make it not a black and White situation with no clear good character and bad character...it's just really cool to hear everyone's different views and thatmit effected everyone differently ...I'm just really touched that everyone said their peice... I can't cmment individually because I dont really know what to say and I don't want to give anything further to story -I will probably write more about it in the next update, I guess just..like thank you so much, it means so much to me that people write such heart felt stuff :') yeah :') sorry if this comment felt lazy or self Indulgent!!!

@Chocotorta @orange plaid face @enchantma you guys!!! XDDD I am so overwhelmed and grateful for this wonderful response to the sasha character!! All I can say is thank you so much!! :'D

@AliceRose awe no problem! He is from Russia :) writing accents is a bitch tho and I've probably done it sooooo wrong!!! XI

@Spacepegasus thank you for both a wonderful comment and also womderful criticism!! I can see where I went wrong thank you and I'll try to keep improving!! :DD


February 20th, 2012, 5:09 am

Janey is having issues, that's for sure...
I kind of feel sorry for her and annoyed at her sluttyness at the same time...

February 20th, 2012, 6:46 am

The expressions are good, I liked the reaction shots. If I'd give a crit it'd be that Sasha's panelling was a bit confusing in places, the angle changed a lot between panels (the head turned 180 degrees on '97 and '98) so it was a bit tricky to keep track of his position. Anyway I'm interested in what you're gonna do with this story.

February 20th, 2012, 8:45 am

Sasha marry me xD

February 20th, 2012, 9:54 am

Right, the reasons why this is bloody amazing: You have chosen your characters really very wisely here, the contrast is spot on. janey's energetic, charismatic and full of life, but clearly "needs" to be so. I think she feels the need to fill her life with that energy and the freedom that "these kids" have, and hence doesn't really care if there's sentiment involved or not because it helps to numb whatever pain she has (rrrrgh, i really wanna know what it is X333). Whereas sasha is the exact opposite, he clearly has his head screwed on the right way (or a "righter" way at least XD) because while he's willing to take it to a point with janey for the sake of "fun" he has enough integrity to know that to go any further would be indulging her issues. Plus we all know he's secretly a nice bloke who wouldn't fuck a girl without feeling ;) (my theories 4 u! if they're wrong then feel free to laugh mockingly) XD

ut gawd, this has been done SO well X3 this kind of dialogue is just beautiful, because its so true and so straight up, un-like so much manga text which all feels like its been airbrushed >^< Any bugger who says your work is "too manga" clearly hasn't even read a word of it, hence they're literally "judging a book by its cover" the small minded squish-sods DX.

ONELASTTHING: sasha's little russian swearword is so adorable, i actually made a weird noise XD does it mean anything?

February 20th, 2012, 10:05 am


February 20th, 2012, 11:30 am


I wonder if he's right, what if she IS running from something?

February 20th, 2012, 1:04 pm

i know you might have said this already but what accent does sasha have?

February 20th, 2012, 3:08 pm

I feel sorry for Janey. He was pretty harsh considering he was fine with making out, haha. D:

February 20th, 2012, 4:46 pm

Sasha you are the best.

February 20th, 2012, 5:27 pm

Poor Janeeeyyyyy :'( If she wants to sleep around that's her choice dammit!! How would he know anything about her!!? D8< Jerk! I mean she was a bit aggressive too but bareeellllly geeez, so harsh/judgemental!! Even if he might have been right....how would he know >:|
oh nooo, now a member in Blake's circle has a problem with Art-History-Major-Girl's circle D:
I wonder how Sasha and Ruthie would get along ._.

February 20th, 2012, 10:29 pm

I side Sasha on this. I wonder what's going on with Janey.

February 21st, 2012, 8:48 am

Aw, I feel bad for her but at the same time she kind of brought it on herself... :<

February 21st, 2012, 5:37 pm

She is a pretty lonely person deep down. Did nobody else notice this or is Sasha just a good judge of character, I wonder !:/

February 22nd, 2012, 10:58 am

I'm adoring Sasha more and more with every page!!

February 24th, 2012, 4:13 pm

You got a deal! XD

February 25th, 2012, 3:15 am

while it's pretty obvious where sasha is coming from here - janey did pretty much just force herself on him - i do think that he said some awfully uncalled for things, considering he just met the girl. aw janey. of course then there's the whole "wanting what you can't have" dynamic just added to the relationship. and that makes things exciting, eh? :)
everything is so lovely.

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